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Denied GreenWitchLys [Denied - Mallsharkz]
Started by GreenWitchLys

OOC

Minecraft Username: GreenWitchLys

Are you at least 18 years old?: I am 23

Have you read the rules? (Link): Yes

(Optional) How did you hear about Avalore?: Came across the name Avalore in the Minecraft Rp Community Safety discord and decided to look the server up.

(Max. 1) Were you referred by someone? If so, please provide their in-game username: N/A

(Optional) Introduce yourself if you’d like, as well as any creations you want to share (e.g. art, builds, skins): My name is Lys or Green. I'm a 23-year-old stay-at-home mom and part-time online college student. I've roleplayed on various Minecraft RP servers since about 2015. I make skins from time to time(although they are quite trash), and I love using roleplay as a creative writing outlet. 

In-Character

Read the following prompt:

The rhythmic lull of hoofbeats are a marching drum to the small group of pioneers and variety of folk you have found yourself amongst, packed into a wobbling wagon. The rolling plains of the Southern Reach and a clear sky stretch out all around you, the buzz of excited chatter a dull wash in your ears as your mind strays to your former life and what has led you here to new lands.

“Nervous?”

You blink, returning to the present moment. A kindly older woman sat near you is smiling warmly with a crinkle to her eyes.

“I can tell it’s your first time. Still remember mine,” she flashes a grin and leans in.

“Tell me my dear, why have you come to the Reach?”

How do you respond (in character)(250 word minimum - please make sure to include at least three references to our lore in your response, with two coming from different pages in the Compendium.  Two of the three selected should also be in-depth, avoid simply name-dropping lore terms. Tie the terms into your character's backstory. Why are they important to them?)

Chaldera thought about the question to herself for a few moments before responding: "I'm a nomad. I travel." Then a pause, there was something more Chaldera wasn't saying. The old woman pushed, and Chal responded, "Fine-" She said sternly, "I felt a pull to the region." A pull to the region? But why? "The spire." Chal simply responded, but the old woman pushed, and Chal responded, "I've heard many tales. Those who fought in the Battle of the Garden Pass. The tales I've heard have inspired me to join the Militia of the Spire." The old lady continued to push for answers, 'Why the Militia of the Spire?, Chal had only one solid answer: "It is of my character to fight against those of immoral character." The old woman seemed satisfied, but asked one more simple question, 'As a nomad, why commit?' This really made Chal think, because it was a valid question. Why would someone with a nomadic background fight for something so planted? She responded sternly, "I fight for what I believe is right within my taught morals." And with that, they made their way to the Southern Reach. Before departing the wagon, one last question was spoken from the old woman's lips, 'Why the southern reach? Why the spire? As a nomad, wouldn't you yearn for more exploration? Why take yourself out of self-exile?' After all the questions the old woman asked, this one in particular had Chaldera really turning her gears. "I believe in the greater good." Chal responded, "I have done what I can in the steppes. Why not offer my services to the most influential space in the region?" With that answer, the old woman nodded in approval. Chaldera's journey begins with that. 

Character Name: Chaldera Mistveil

Character Race: Fey-Touched, Falstoner Culture.

Character Age: 39

 Brief Physical Description: Standing at 4'3" with amber eyes and grey-sage hair, this bark-skinned Fey-touched lady usually sported a calm, determined expression. She was not one to let others hinder her goals. 

Image of Skin and Figura Model: I do not have a skin made yet, and I'm unsure about how to go about getting a fey-touched skin made. 

Hey there! My name is Delta (Or Mallsharkz) and I will be handling your application. The main thing to note here is that you do need a skin to whitelist, just to  ensure it is compliant with the compendium, and the rules. 

If you are uncertain on going about making a skin, you can always look for FTU (Free to use) skins on sites like planet minecraft and editing them. 

The second thing is that while you have made three references, none of them are quite in-depth enough to approve this application yet. I would suggest elaborating a bit more on where Chaldera came from and their life in the Steppes, or maybe more on why she is coming to the Spire. 

Please leave a reply once you have edited your response! 

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andromeda | the corvid


 

Due to inactivity, this application will have to be denied. You are welcome to resubmit the application at any time! 

andromeda | the corvid